SEASHELLS
i could hear the waves washing up to shore.as they crash against the bank i floated out to sea.WHOOSH......... there went another one racing against the others rushing towards me.i was paddle boarding for the first time. i paddled painfully to the east.the rest of the group including me followed ben. while dean rescued emma who was floating like a dead fish to the fish and ship shop.lilly and i were on sophies tail for the rest of the time that we were there.as we travelled back to shore i hopped on my knees and caught a perfect wave.i dragged my board up onto the sand.even though i was exhausted it was the best day of camp and i cant wait to do it again.
You have used a simile and some great choices of interesting words. I can imagine you and Lilly being on Sophie's 'tail'. Excellent detail Ava. Mrs Takerei
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